The Forgotten Gods of the Drowned Kingdom: Only Half Came Back

Beneath the black pillars, a young guard counted the men entering the buried doorway, unaware that some would vanish beyond the reach of their companions.


Timeline of Events

The Storm
A violent storm stripped sand from the western dunes, exposing black pillars and a buried doorway beyond the last cultivated fields.

The Report
A field labourer discovered the ancient stonework. His account reached the city, bringing the newly exposed site to the attention of priests and officials.

The Expedition
Stone-cutters and armed guards travelled west under priestly authority. The workers began clearing the entrance while a junior guard remained outside to record their numbers.

The Withdrawal
Only half the men returned from the darkness. Tools lay abandoned, footprints were disturbed and blood marked the sand. The expedition withdrew, leaving the missing workers’ fate unresolved.


Only Half Came Back

The sand slipped over Ipu’s sandals as he carried the tally board along the line of stone-cutters gathered beneath the black pillars. Morning had gone in hauling water and keeping men clear of falling masonry. At the city gate, such a duty would have earned him less grit between his teeth. Still, he had waited half a year for an assignment beyond the walls, and he intended to bring his captain an accurate count.

“Count their feet if their faces trouble you,” said Henu, the older guard beside him, watching two cutters lever a slab aside. “They keep moving. You keep counting. Everyone remains employed.”

“I know how to count,” Ipu replied, scratching another mark into the wax. He glanced towards the labourers dragging stone from the doorway. “I am waiting for them to stand still long enough to prove it.”

The priest’s seal-bearer approached, lifting the hem of his robe from the sand. He inspected the opening the cutters had cleared, where shadow filled the space beyond the pillars. The wind swept along the ridge above them while the hollow itself remained strangely still. Touching the seal at his neck, he ordered the cutters inside and sent selected guards behind them.

Kebi, a broad-handed cutter who had shared dried figs with Ipu at midday, paused to tighten the leather around his mallet. He had spent their meal complaining about the price of flour.

“Put me down as one who came willingly,” Kebi said, a crooked smile showing beneath his dusty beard. “My wife will enjoy hearing it. She says I have to be pushed towards honest work.”

“Then come out willingly as well,” Ipu answered, making the final mark. Kebi laughed and followed the others into the shadows. Ipu watched the last guard disappear, drew his fingertip down the board and checked the total. Twelve had entered.

For a while the sounds of their work carried through the entrance. Stone struck stone, someone called for more light, and a quarrel rose over a tool passed the wrong way. Ipu took comfort in those familiar complaints. As afternoon thinned towards evening, the blows grew farther apart, until he found himself waiting for each one. Henu cleaned sand from his sandal fastening, though his eyes kept returning to the doorway.

The first man stumbled out as the sky reddened above the ridge. He dropped to his knees beside a pillar, clutching his bleeding arm. Others followed in a rush, one supporting a companion whose heels dragged through the sand. Ipu helped lower the man, then searched the dark entrance for the rest. Only six figures had emerged.

“Where is Kebi?” Ipu asked the wounded cutter, crouching beside him. “He was working with you.”

The cutter turned towards the doorway, lips moving before his voice came. “Behind us,” he said, tightening his hand over the torn sleeve. “I heard him call.”

Ipu started forwards, yet Henu reached the entrance first and barred his way with an outstretched arm. For the first time that day, the older guard’s voice had lost its humour.

“Stay here. Count who is standing.”

Ipu looked past him. A stone mallet lay in the sand near the pillar, its leather handle dark from a worker’s grip. Farther back, a bronze chisel caught the last daylight. He thought he heard movement within, faint beneath the wind sliding across the ridge.

“There are men inside,” Ipu said, closing his hand around his spear. “We have guards. We can bring them out.”

The seal-bearer stepped into his path, dust caught in the creases of his face. “The order is to withdraw. Help the wounded to the road.”

“And the others?” Ipu demanded, holding up the board. “What answer shall I carry back?”

The official studied the marks and looked away. “Write what returned.”

Henu helped the injured cutter stand, and Ipu went beside them as the diminished party climbed the ridge. He kept the board close to his chest, shielding the wax from his sleeve. Twelve marks stood in one column, six in the other. The missing men had names, trades and families waiting for them, yet the only certainty he could carry home was the space between those numbers. Behind him, the tools remained scattered below the black pillars, and the last light left the doorway while he was still watching it.


Abandoned mallets and chisels lie in blood-marked sand beneath the black pillars, left behind when Ipu and the surviving expedition withdrew, leaving six men’s fates unknown.


Inspiration Behind the Story

The disappearance of the stone-cutters offers a way to approach the buried doorway through the ordinary people caught in its consequences. Ipu begins with a simple duty: count the workers entering the ancient tomb and account for their return. As the day passes, that responsibility becomes something far more personal. Every missing man has a life beyond the expedition, with family, work and people expecting him home.

The abandoned tools, wounded survivors and disturbed sand connect this Chronicle to the evidence later discovered in Jackal at the Threshold. Yet the greater mystery remains beyond the black pillars. Through Ipu’s experience, the story explores the conflict between obedience and conscience, and how a few marks on a tally board can become the first surviving record of something the city will struggle to understand.


Related Book Series

Related Books of The Forgotten Gods of the Drowned Kingdom

Six men disappeared beyond the black pillars. Their companions returned with abandoned tools, blood in the sand and questions no surviving witness could answer.

In Book One: Jackal at the Threshold, tomb robber Neris follows rumours of the newly uncovered necropolis into the western dunes. What begins as a desperate search for treasure leads her towards ancient judgement, buried gods and a truth that will change her life.

The story continues in Book Two: The Scales Beneath the Sand, as the disturbance spreads beyond the desert into the city’s burial routes, sacred shrines and living streets. With the old powers stirring, Neris finds herself drawn deeper into a conflict whose consequences are only beginning to emerge.


Next Chronicle

News of the failed expedition reaches the river quarter, carrying fear into households whose men travelled west in search of honest wages. At the city work court, a stone-cutter’s wife searches the diminished line of returning workers for her husband. She wants answers from the guards and officials, while the men who survived struggle to explain what happened beyond the black pillars. As rumours spread through the streets, the absence of a body, a familiar voice and even a working tool begins to carry a terrible weight of its own.

Next: No Bodies, No Tools

Egyptian Mythic Fantasy, Anubis, and the Burden of the Dead


Where the River Meets the Dead

The dead were never far from the living in The Forgotten Gods of the Drowned Kingdom. They pressed close through river stink, damp stone, old prayers, sealed doors, and the narrow spaces where poverty forced the living to touch what should have remained undisturbed. In this Egyptian mythic fantasy world, tombs were never simple ruins. They were sacred architecture, built around memory, judgement, passage, and the uneasy belief that the dead still had claims upon the world they had left behind.

That closeness shaped Jackal at the Threshold, the first book in the series, before Anubis ever stepped fully into view. The story began in the river quarter, where Neris lived between hunger and guilt, between the need to keep her mother alive and the knowledge that her work among the dead had already cost too much. The noble terraces rose upriver in white stone, catching the last light of the day, while the slums below sank into shadow, smoke, mudbrick, and the rot lifted from the water by evening heat.

This is the root of the series. Egyptian mythology is not laid over the world as decoration. It is felt through burial practice, thresholds, funerary silence, jackal imagery, and the dreadful possibility that judgement may be waiting in places ordinary people have learned to rob, fear, or ignore. The gods do not begin as distant names from old stories. They begin as pressure in the stone, as warnings cut into doorways, as whispered talk of Anubis stirring when a boundary has been broken too often.


Anubis at the Edge of Judgement

Anubis belongs to thresholds. He stands at the edge between the living and the dead, between burial and desecration, between memory and judgement. In this dark mythological fantasy series, that role matters more than spectacle. He is not a generic shadow god, nor a simple patron offering power to a chosen hero. His presence is severe, patient, and bound to what has been done.

That is why Jackal at the Threshold begins with theft rather than battle. Neris is a tomb robber from the river slums, and her skill lies in stone, rope, darkness, narrow ledges, old mechanisms, and the ability to keep moving when fear should have stopped her. She steals from the dead because rent, food, medicine, and hunger have left little room for clean choices. Yet the story refuses to make survival into absolution. Poverty explains much. It does not erase everything.

Anubis enters through that tension. The western dunes uncover black stone after a storm. Workers enter and fail to return. Rumours move through the slums faster than certainty. A buried place, older than the known order of the city, waits beneath the sand. Neris goes because the world has trained her to see danger and value together. She knows the signs. She reads blood, abandoned tools, carvings, warnings, and silence. Still, need pulls harder.

When she crosses into the Drowned Kingdom, the tomb itself becomes an instrument of judgement. Jackals walk the walls. Scales wait in carved stillness. Hearts are shown in stone as if every secret has already been measured. The deeper Neris goes, the less the place feels like a tomb built for the dead alone. It becomes a boundary that remembers who has entered it, what they carried, and what they tried to leave unnamed.


Neris and the Cost of Survival

Neris is central because she is human before she is anything else. She is not a polished champion waiting for a divine weapon. She is a daughter, a thief, a survivor, and a woman shaped by a death she has never truly faced. Her brother’s collapse in a tomb shaft lies beneath every choice she makes. She saw the crack. She dismissed it. She sent him ahead. That single remembered moment gives the first book its deepest weight.

The power of this Egyptian mythology fantasy series comes from that kind of pressure. Divine judgement does not arrive in an empty life. It arrives where guilt has already made a home.

Neris’s mother keeps the story grounded in the mortal world. Her illness, the cost of healers, the bare room by the river, the careful division of four silvers between medicine, rent, and food all matter. These details prevent the mythic world from floating away into abstract gods and relics. Before Neris stands before Anubis, she stands before hunger. Before she touches the Threshold, she has already crossed moral boundaries in order to survive.

That makes her judgement more painful. Anubis does not condemn her simply because she is poor. He does not ignore the cruelty of a world where the dead are buried with gold while the living starve beside the river. Yet he draws her back to the moment where choice remained. The crack in the stone. The hurry. The brother who trusted her. The weight she carried and refused to name.

This is where the story changes. Neris returns the relic she came to steal. She confesses what she has hidden even from herself. Anubis marks her, and the burden he gives is no easy blessing. She will see when souls stray. She will hear unrest where others hear only night wind and water. What she disturbed will no longer pass unnoticed.


The Door Opened by Jackal at the Threshold

Jackal at the Threshold is the first entry in The Forgotten Gods of the Drowned Kingdom, and it works as a doorway rather than an explanation of the entire war. It brings the reader into a world of tombs, river-prayers, restless spirits, funerary dread, and divine attention without emptying the larger series of mystery.

The book belongs to Egyptian mythic fantasy because its supernatural force rises from recognisable sacred ground. The Drowned Kingdom is not simply an ancient ruin with treasure inside. It is a necropolis of judgement, silence, and unfinished passage. Its walls are carved with jackals, scales, hearts, stars, drowned kings, and warnings left by those who understood too late that the dead are not abandoned things.

The experience of entering the book is intimate rather than grand. The reader follows Neris through the alleys, the heat, the old smoke of her home, the desert road, and finally into cold black stone. Every movement carries the body with it: sand under sandals, torchlight bending across carved walls, breath misting in impossible cold, fingers testing ledges, muscles straining against fear. This is not a clean chosen-one adventure. It is a story about what happens when someone desperate crosses into death’s territory and is allowed to return.

By the end, Neris has stopped being merely a thief of the dead, yet she has not become safe, powerful, or fully informed. She believes she has become a bridge between the living and the dead. She has no understanding yet of the full hidden god-war moving beneath the surface of the world. That ignorance is essential. The first book closes with a woman changed by judgement, walking back into the same poor streets, with the same hunger still waiting, and a new awareness of the dead moving around her.


The Gods Beneath the Sand

The wider series will open slowly from that first burden. The Egyptian gods do not begin by shattering the sky. Their war begins through sacred wrongness. Burial routes falter. Souls fail to pass cleanly. Tombs open when they should remain sealed. Relics wake. Human beings are chosen, armed, watched, and used.

This is the hidden engine of The Forgotten Gods of the Drowned Kingdom. The gods avoid open war because such conflict would devastate the mortal world. Instead, they act through chosen humans bound to divine weapons. The weapon carries the force first. The human bearer becomes dangerous only through endurance, discipline, survival, and cost.

That rule keeps the series grounded. Neris does not rise because she has been handed effortless power. Her first Anubis-linked weapon is intimate, funerary, close-range, and judgement-bound. It belongs to tombs and thresholds, not battlefield spectacle. Its danger comes from what it is tied to: burial order, false return, broken passage, and the dead who have failed to rest.

Other gods wait beyond the first threshold. Set moves through disorder, desert violence, destabilisation, and predatory pressure. Thoth brings record, reckoning, hidden knowledge, and an intelligence that can be as dangerous as any blade. Neith carries ancient discipline, strategy, and martial severity. Horus represents visible legitimacy, kingship, and ordered force. Ra remains the remote solar authority whose weight shapes the divine hierarchy even before he steps forward.

Yet the series must always return to Neris. Gods may shift the board, but human lives carry the cost. The river slums, Hamat’s warnings, her mother’s illness, the memory of her brother, and the quiet work of guiding unsettled souls remain as important as any relic duel or divine decree. Without those things, the war would become spectacle. With them, it remains sacred, dangerous, and painfully human.


What Waits Beyond the Threshold

The first book leaves its deepest questions unanswered because the world has only begun to move. Neris has crossed the Threshold. Anubis has marked her. The dead now call to her when their passage fails. Somewhere beyond the city, old stone shifts beneath the sand, and attention stirs in places she cannot yet name.

That is the shape of the series promise. A grave thief has been pulled into the service of judgement, yet the judgement of gods may prove no cleaner than the lives they weigh. Divine weapons will appear as burdens rather than gifts. Chosen humans will discover that being claimed by a god can mean being protected, used, lied to, or sacrificed. The dead will not always pass cleanly, and the living will not always understand who has broken the route.

In this world, tombs are not background scenery. They are pressure points between the living and the dead. The river is not merely water. It is memory, passage, rot, need, and prayer. Anubis is not a symbol printed on the surface of a fantasy setting. He is first felt through the silence before judgement, the dark edge of a doorway, the unseen weight of a heart, and the terrible mercy of being sent back changed.

The war has already begun, though Neris does not yet understand its shape.

She has only heard the dead.

The gods will come later.